<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> <rss version="2.0" xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" ><channel><title>Mike Salsbury&#039;s Blog &#187; NaNoWriMo</title> <atom:link href="http://mikesalsbury.com/tag/nanowrimo/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" /><link>http://mikesalsbury.com</link> <description>A writer, writing...</description> <lastBuildDate>Sun, 12 Feb 2012 19:27:10 +0000</lastBuildDate> <language>en</language> <sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod> <sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency> <generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2</generator> <item><title>How I Wrote a Novel in a Month</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Sun, 28 Nov 2010 21:54:26 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[Writing Tips]]></category> <category><![CDATA[Dramatica]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[modular plotting]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[revision log]]></category> <category><![CDATA[Scrivener]]></category> <category><![CDATA[Storybook]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing fast]]></category> <category><![CDATA[yWriter]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/?p=718</guid> <description><![CDATA[How I wrote 50,000 words for NaNoWriMo in under a month, including tips on brainstorming, using a revision log, using placeholder text, modular plotting, novel-writing software, and writing quickly. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Each year, The Office of Letters and Light sponsors an Internet-based challenge called National Novel Writing Month (or “<a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">NaNoWriMo</a>” for short).  If you’ve ever thought about writing a novel, or if you’ve tried to do it before and failed, I’d encourage you to check out their site and participate in the next NaNoWriMo challenge.  In this post, I am going to share with you the tips and tricks that helped me to complete the NaNoWriMo challenge successfully, and what I’ve learned in doing so.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Speed is of the Essence</strong></p><p>To complete the NaNoWriMo challenge, you absolutely MUST resist the urge to go back and edit anything you’ve written before.  Any time you spend rewriting your work is time you’re taking away from the goal of cranking out additional words.  Remember, once the challenge is over, you have all the time in the world to go back and make your words better.  But if you don’t have them <strong>written</strong> there is nothing to make better.</p><p>So, how do you resist the urge to go back and rewrite?  These are the tools and techniques that worked for me, and may help you:</p><ul><li><strong>Before you start, brainstorm.</strong> Get to know your characters, the locations they’ll be in, and have a basic idea for how they’ll get from start to finish.  I have a list of many <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2011/05/open-source-and-free-writing-software/">free open source tools</a> and <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/10/fiction-writing-software/">commercial fiction writing tools</a> on this site. (Remember, these are just tools.  Use them to enhance your writing process – not tell you what to write and how to write it.  It’s your novel, after all.)</li><li><strong>Create a “revision log”</strong> that stores all the changes you want to go back and make later.  Once you make a note in the log, keep writing as though the revision has already been made.</li><li><strong>Use “placeholder text”</strong> for any person, place, or object names you haven’t figured out yet.  Later, you can “find and replace” that placeholder text with the name you decide on.  If you feel like it’s essential that you have something named before you move on, remember that there are a lot of “name generators” on the web that can help you.</li><li><strong>Plot out your novel in a “modular” way</strong> to make it easy to restructure and reorganize later. Write in “scenes” rather than chapters, where a “scene” is defined as a specific group of characters in a specific place, doing a specific thing.  If the location, group, or activity changes, it’s a new scene.</li><li><strong>Use a novel-writing tool</strong> like <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.php">Scrivener</a>, <a href="http://www.spacejock.com/yWriter5.html">yWriter</a>, <a href="http://www.newnovelist.com/NN3/">NewNovelist</a>, <a href="http://storybook.intertec.ch/joomla/">Storybook</a>, or any of dozens of other <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/10/fiction-writing-software/">fiction writing tools</a> designed for the purpose.  I found that with Scrivener I could store my revision log in the same project file as my novel, so I could easily add to it as I went.</li><li>Realize that <strong>you’re only writing your first draft</strong>.  Like any first draft, it’s probably going to stink.  That’s OK.  You’re the only one who has to read it right now.  And <em>no one will ever read it</em> if you don’t get it <strong><em>written</em></strong>.</li></ul><p>I’m going to expand on the above points a bit, to help you understand what I mean.  Feel free to skip the rest of this article or scan down to the points that interest you.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Brainstorming</strong></p><p>When I started writing my NaNoWriMo 2009 novel, I had only the vaguest idea how the story would go.  My writing was sort of a “fictional stream of consciousness” from the starting point.  As plot ideas came to me, I incorporated them.  When I decided they were clichés, I abandoned them.  The finished piece was, well, crap.  But, I did meet my goal of 50,000 words of fiction in a month.</p><p>For 2010, I was determined to do better.  I found a copy of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B000H774K0/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399369&amp;creativeASIN=B000H774K0">Dramatica Pro</a> for sale on eBay, and managed to snag it for $35.  It’s normally around a $200 program, so this was a major steal.  I spent as much spare time as I could stand with the software through September and October, telling it about the characters I envisioned, the story I was hoping to tell, etc.  When I finally hit the end of its brainstorming process at the end of October, I had around 12,000 words of background material on the characters, their relationships, the story lines, etc.</p><p>I’m not suggesting that you need to run out and spend money on writing software.  Here are some less expensive solutions if you don’t have the money (or desire) to invest in a software product:</p><ul><li>“<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0312010443?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=0312010443">How to Write a Damn Good Novel</a>” by James N. Frey was one of the first books I read on the subject, and is still one of my favorites.  You may find a copy in your local library, a used bookstore, or a friend’s bookshelf.</li><li>“<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0312104782?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=0312104782">How to Write a Damn Good Novel, II</a>” by James N. Frey expands on the first book and offers additional material.</li><li>“<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1582975361?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=1582975361">Fiction Writer’s Workshop</a>” by Josip Novakovich contains a number of exercises to help you find and expand on ideas.</li><li>“<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/0898799058?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=0898799058">Beginnings, Middles &amp; Ends</a>” by Nancy Kress provides some good advice.</li><li>Although it’s not specifically about novel writing, J. Michael Straczynski’s “<a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/1582971587?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=1789&amp;creative=390957&amp;creativeASIN=1582971587">The Complete Book of Scriptwriting</a>” includes a wealth of good writing tips.</li><li>Discuss your story idea with friends, especially those who are avid readers.  If they tell you your story idea reminds them of something they’ve already read, think about how you can twist the idea so that it no longer resembles the story they read.</li><li>Visit your local library and talk to the librarians.  Some libraries offer writing workshops and programs that might help you.</li><li>Use the web!  Here are a few links I’ve found interesting (there are more in the “Writing Resources” area of this site):</li></ul><p style="padding-left: 60px;">o   [io9.com] “<a href="http://io9.com/5543339/the-5-laws-of-making-a-story-complicated-without-creating-an-ungodly-mess">The 5 laws of making a story complicated without creating an ungodly mess</a>” by Charlie Jane Anders</p><p style="padding-left: 60px;">o   [suite101.com] “<a href="http://www.suite101.com/content/how-to-create-a-plot-for-a-novel-a133834">How to Create a Plot for a Novel</a>” by Suzanne Pitner</p><p style="padding-left: 60px;">o   [creative-writing-now.com] “<a href="http://www.creative-writing-now.com/tips-for-writing-a-novel.html">Tips for Writing a Novel: So You’ve Got an Idea  &#8212; What Now?</a>” by William Victor</p><p style="padding-left: 60px;">o   [musik-therapie.at] “<a href="http://www.musik-therapie.at/PederHill/index.htm">Learn the Elements of a Novel</a>”</p><p>I’m sure you can find many more.  Consider the above just a starting point.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Creating and Using a Revision Log</strong></p><p>If you’ve read many books or articles on novel writing, you’ve probably seen some version of the advice “Write your way through to the end without stopping.”  This is good advice in general, but it’s absolutely critical in a deadline situation like NaNoWriMo.  Unfortunately, as you start writing your book, you will invariably think of things that should be different in the parts you’ve already written.  Maybe your main character should be female instead of male, maybe the setting should a space station rather than a train station, or maybe your heroine should have two brothers instead of a sister.  The temptation is to go back and rewrite those earlier parts to make those sweeping changes.  If you keep a revision log, you can discipline yourself to let go of that need to change things.</p><p>Imagine that you’ve been writing a story about a man who travels to Europe and meets the love of his life there.  About ten chapters in, you realize that there are some great things you could do with this story if only your main character was a woman.  What do you do?  Open up your revision log.  Leave yourself a note like “Fred should really be a woman.  In chapters 1-10, rewrite Fred to Jane and set up the fact that Jane was robbed at gunpoint in the airport before coming to Europe.”</p><p>Now, close the revision log and write as though you’ve already made those changes.  From the next word you write until the end of the book, start writing “Jane” where you were writing “Fred” and refer to the robbery as though you had written it in from the beginning.</p><p>When you finish the first draft, open up your revision log and go back to make the changes needed to properly tell your story.  Rather than chewing up your deadline time going back and rewriting words (which won’t add to your word count or get you any closer to the end of your tale), just keep writing and trust yourself to go back to make the necessary changes once your first draft is written.</p><p>Yes, not making the revisions as you go means that there can be huge inconsistencies in your novel at the end of the first draft.  But that’s OK.  It’s a first draft.  No one has to read it but you, and you can always make the changes later before you show it to anyone.  (And you can still call that updated version a first draft if you want to, if that makes you feel better.)</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Using Placeholder Text</strong></p><p>Something I struggled with in both of my NaNoWriMo novels was naming the characters and places in the story.  No matter what name I came up with, I just didn’t like it.  Even going through the lengthy plotting process in Dramatica, I just couldn’t seem to think of good names for my characters and locations.  Finally, I told myself “We’ll plug those in later” and moved on.</p><p>Anywhere I needed to refer to a character I hadn’t named, I used placeholder text like “[Village]” for the name of the main character’s home town, which I had pictured as a small village.  When I later settled on the name “Estervale”, I had the word processor replace “[Village]” with “Estervale” throughout the document.  The resulting text makes it look like I had that name in mind from the beginning.</p><p>The key to using Placeholder Text is to make sure that you mark it in a way that uses spelling or punctuation that you wouldn’t normally use in the story.  For my example above, it is possible I might have used the word “village” in the story to refer generically to a village.  By surrounding the placeholder with brackets (“[]”) I could ensure that my find-and-replace method replaced only the placeholder text and not every occurrence of the word “village” in my story.  If you planned to use brackets in your story, use some other punctuation mark instead.  Or, if you want to leave your options completely open, make your placeholder text unique – like “InsertVillageName” or some other string you know you won’t use in the story.</p><p>And be sure to list these placeholders in your Revision Log to remind you what they are and that you need to go back to fix them later.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>“Modular Plotting”</strong></p><p>In one of the fiction writing seminars I have attended, the presenter defined the word “scene” as he saw it.  The definition condensed to “A group of one or more characters, in a specific location, doing a specific thing, over a specific period of time.”  By his definition, if you had three characters in their living room, trimming a Christmas tree, and one of them left the room, you had a new scene.  If the three characters stay in the room, but finish trimming the tree and start making cookies, that’s a new scene.  At the time, I thought this was splitting hairs, and a lot of extra work.</p><p>As it turns out, it’s really rather logical, fairly easy to do, and has one very useful benefit.  Your entire story becomes “modular”.  Imagine you aren’t using the concept of scenes as I’ve described here.  Instead, you’ve written a chapter of your book where three characters trim a Christmas tree, bake cookies, and go caroling.</p><p>Farther along in your writing, you realize that the cookie baking activities should really take place much earlier in the story, perhaps two or three chapters earlier.  If you’ve written the story chapter-by-chapter, you’ll have to read through the chapter until you get to the cookie baking part, cut it out of the story, clean up the text before and after it, paste it into the earlier chapter, then adjust the text before and after it.   It’s not big deal, but it could have gone much easier if you’d written the story in a modular fashion.</p><p>In the “modular” version of the above story, you have separate “scenes” for the tree trimming, cookie baking, and caroling activities.  Each scene could be stored in a separate file, or a separate element in your preferred writing tool.  When you realize that you want the cookie scene to appear sooner in the story, all you have to do is move that file earlier into the book.  You might need to adjust the start and end of the file to blend into the new location, but you probably won’t have to change anything in the scenes before and after it.  The scenes are “modular” in nature and can be shifted about as needed.</p><p>The Scrivener software lends itself very well to this modular approach.  So would the open source Storybook software.  All of these allow you to have a “master document” with “sub-documents” that you can move about as needed.</p><p>This approach could also be used with the traditional “index card” method where each card represents a specific scene.  The writer can shuffle the cards into any order to tell the story in the desired way.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Novel Writing Tools</strong></p><p>Because I’m still a fledgling, unpublished, newbie author, I realize that there is a lot I don’t know about how to write a good story.  For me, using tools like Dramatica helps me to think my story through before I sit down to write it.  But just as important as plotting out the story is the tool you use to help you enter and organize your words.</p><p>For NaNoWriMo 2009, I used <a href="http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0039L6G00/ref=as_li_ss_tl?ie=UTF8&amp;tag=mikesalsbusbl-20&amp;linkCode=as2&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399369&amp;creativeASIN=B0039L6G00">Microsoft Word</a> and <a href="http://www.openoffice.org/">OpenOffice.org</a> and they were fine.  I got the job done, and hit my 50,000 words without a problem.  After beating the challenge that year, I received a discount coupon for the Scrivener software for the Macintosh.  I ran through the tutorials provided with it and realized it was a good fit for the way I wrote.  I bought a copy.  Then, as ridiculous as it might seem, I bought a MacBook so that I could have the software with me when I traveled.  Up that point, I hadn’t owned or used a Mac for about 10 years.</p><p>Just prior to starting NaNoWriMo 2010, I found out that they are working on a Windows compatible version of Scrivener.  Since my primary desktop computer is a Windows 7 machine, this was good news.  I downloaded and used the beta to write my 2010 story, and I’ve been very happy with the software.  (I have a <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2011/04/scrivener-for-windows-review/">review of Scrivener for Windows</a> available.)</p><p>I created separate “Texts” (think of them as text files) for each scene in my story.  Into each of these text files, I pasted the text from my Dramatica brainstorming about what I wanted to accomplish in that scene.  When November 1 rolled around and NaNoWriMo began, I opened up each text file and started writing the scene I had described in the notes.  When I was finished, I deleted the notes.</p><p>By organizing each text file around a specific scene, I was able to move events in the story to earlier or later parts of the book by simply clicking and dragging them in the Scrivener window.  This made it much easier for me to restructure parts of the narrative on the fly without actually having to do any revision.</p><p>When I have the story in Scrivener the way I want it, I can have the software “Compile” all those text files in order into a finished manuscript file.</p><p>I was also able to create a “Research” folder  that contained information about the characters, locations, and story points I wanted to make.  I also included a Revision Log among those documents, which I updated as I continued to write.  (Items in the research folder are not included in the draft that Scrivener compiles for you.)</p><p>Below is a screenshot of Scrivener in action, with a portion of my NaNoWriMo 2010 book open in it.</p><div id="attachment_719" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 650px"><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/scrivener1/" rel="attachment wp-att-719"><img class="size-large wp-image-719" title="Scrivener Text View" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/scrivener1-640x425.png" alt="Scrivener Text View" width="640" height="425" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Scrivener Text View</p></div><p>In the left-hand pane of this window, you can see that I’ve got a separate text document for each scene in the novel.  The center pane is the word processor built into Scrivener, in which you can see the text for the scene “Kevin is attacked”.  In the upper-right pane, I have the “index card” telling me the name of the scene and a brief description of what happens in it.  Below that, I’ve labeled this document as a “Scene” and indicated that it is in “First Draft” status.  Additional notes can be entered into the “Document Notes” section if I need more than the Index card holds.</p><p>By clicking and dragging any of the text files in the left-hand pane, I can move the corresponding scene earlier or later in my story line.  There is also an “index card” view that allows me to reorganize the story using a virtual version of paper index cards.</p><div id="attachment_720" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 650px"><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/scrivener2/" rel="attachment wp-att-720"><img class="size-large wp-image-720" title="Scrivener Corkboard View" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/scrivener2-640x425.png" alt="Scrivener Corkboard View" width="640" height="425" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Scrivener Corkboard View</p></div><p>Since this isn’t a review of the software, I’m not going to go into great detail about it here.  Suffice it to say that I found Scrivener very helpful and intuitive for my particular writing style.  It may or may not be helpful for yours.</p><p>Other similar tools you might want to consider include Spacejock Software’s free yWriter 5 software, which includes features for organizing scenes, project notes, characters, locations, and items – as well as writing your story.</p><div id="attachment_722" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 650px"><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/ywriter5/" rel="attachment wp-att-722"><img class="size-large wp-image-722" title="Spacejock Software's yWriter 5" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/ywriter5-640x323.png" alt="Spacejock Software's yWriter 5" width="640" height="323" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Spacejock Software&#39;s yWriter 5</p></div><p>The open source “Storybook” software also provides tools for organizing your story components as well as drafting the story itself.  As you can see below, I began writing my notes for NaNoWriMo 2010 in Storybook before switching over to Scrivener.  I was already using the “scene” idea.  Each of the thin boxes you see in the left-hand pane represents a modular scene.  Storybook allows you to drag those around as need between the chapters (the larger gray boxes).</p><div id="attachment_721" class="wp-caption alignnone" style="width: 650px"><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/storybook/" rel="attachment wp-att-721"><img class="size-large wp-image-721" title="Open Source Storybook Software" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/storybook-640x431.png" alt="Open Source Storybook Software" width="640" height="431" /></a><p class="wp-caption-text">Open Source Storybook Software</p></div><p>If you’d like to try fiction writing software and don’t have money to spend, Storybook is a nice option since it’s free of charge (though the free version does contain a few “nag” messages about donating to the project).</p><p>From now until the release of the finished version, the public beta for Scrivener for Windows is free.  (The Mac version can be downloaded as a free trial.)</p><p>yWriter 5 is a free product as well, and is worth taking a look at.</p><p>There are many other text editors, word processors, and novel writing products on the market you can consider as well.  Some of these are listed on my site’s Resources page.</p><p style="text-align: center;"><strong>Conclusion</strong></p><p>Getting a novel written in 30 days is not an impossible challenge.  In each of the last two years, I’ve managed to win the NaNoWriMo challenge of creating 50,000 words of original fiction in a month.  The keys for me have been to plot out the idea in advance, use a modular approach to constructing the story, use a revision log to keep myself from wasting time revising as I go, and having novel writing software to help me keep things organized.  Hopefully, some of these tools and ideas will help you in your own writing.</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/how-i-wrote-a-novel-in-a-month/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>NaNoWriMo 2010 Winner!</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/nanowrimo-2010-winner/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/nanowrimo-2010-winner/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Sun, 28 Nov 2010 09:43:14 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/nanowrimo-2010-winner/</guid> <description><![CDATA[Announcement that I won the NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) competition for 2010. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/nanowrimo-2010-winner/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/nano_10_winner_240x120-7.png"><img style="background-image: none; margin: 0px 10px 6px 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; display: inline; float: left; padding-top: 0px; border: 0px;" title="nano_10_winner_240x120-7" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/nano_10_winner_240x120-7_thumb.png" border="0" alt="nano_10_winner_240x120-7" width="244" height="124" align="left" /></a>At about 3:30am today, I submitted the current contents of the draft of my novel &#8220;Downfall&#8221; to the <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org">National Novel Writing Month</a> web site for word counting.  It responded with &#8220;Congratulations! You&#8217;re a winner&#8221; and offered me the link to claim my goodies.</p><p>The &#8220;goodies&#8221; that winners of the challenge receive include a  congratulatory video featuring the staff of the Office of Letters and Light (which runs the contest), downloadable &#8220;winner&#8221; badges like the one pictured here, and a PDF certificate you can download, customize with your name and your novel&#8217;s name, then print and (if you like) frame.</p><p>I ordered my &#8220;<a href="https://store.lettersandlight.org/merchandise/nanowrimo-2010-winners-t-shirt">winner shirt</a>&#8221; from them.  This is a standard T-shirt which features a variation on the image shown above.  (Costs $20.00 with profits funding next year&#8217;s event.)</p><p>On December 2, winners receive a promotional code from Amazon.com&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="https://www.createspace.com/">CreateSpace</a>&#8221; service and the developers of the &#8220;<a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivenerforwindows/">Scrivener</a>&#8221; software.  The CreateSpace code allows you to print a paperback copy of your book for free, one that looks like any paperback you might find on the shelves at a local bookstore.  The Scrivener code provides a 50% discount on their novel writing software (which I used to great effect this year on Windows and have previously purchased for the Macintosh).</p><p>My novel isn&#8217;t finished yet, but I&#8217;m planning to complete it now and edit it some time in the next few weeks.  Then I&#8217;ll have CreateSpace print a copy I can put on the shelf.</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/28/nanowrimo-2010-winner/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>Nanowrimo Update &#8211; 11/27/2010</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/27/nanowrimo-update-11272010/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/27/nanowrimo-update-11272010/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Sat, 27 Nov 2010 07:23:44 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/nanowrimo-update-11272010/</guid> <description><![CDATA[An update on my progress in the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) competition. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/27/nanowrimo-update-11272010/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image2.png"><img style="background-image: none; border-right-width: 10px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 10px; display: inline; float: left; border-top-width: 0px; border-bottom-width: 0px; border-left-width: 0px; padding-top: 0px;" title="image" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image_thumb2.png" border="0" alt="image" width="148" height="147" align="left" /></a>It&#8217;s three days until the NaNoWriMo 2010 challenge is over.  I&#8217;m sitting on 42,188 completed words in my draft.  I had hoped to be well over 50,000 by this point and finished with the challenge.</p><p>On the other hand, I have a much better handle on where I need the story to go this year than I did last year.  I have a set of scenes plotted out in Scrivener and all I really need to go is go back and write them.  Motivating myself to do that is, and has typically been, the greatest challenge for me.  There&#8217;s a part of me that feels like once I&#8217;ve outlined the story and fleshed it out a bit, it&#8217;s &#8220;done&#8221; and there&#8217;s no point continuing to write.  That&#8217;s silly, of course, but it&#8217;s how my mind works.  Yesterday I managed to push quite a bit of text out.  On 11/25, I was counting about 11,000 words of notes in my total.  Today, with over 42,000 words as my total, I am counting only finished words in the draft.  So I&#8217;ve managed to crank out over 10,000 words today alone, which is pretty darned good.</p><p>But is it good enough to reach 50,000 by November 30?  We&#8217;ll have to see.</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/27/nanowrimo-update-11272010/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>Nanowrimo Update &#8211; 11/16/2010</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/17/nanowrimo-week-2/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/17/nanowrimo-week-2/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Wed, 17 Nov 2010 05:04:55 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/nanowrimo-week-2/</guid> <description><![CDATA[An update on my progress in the National Novel Writing Month competition. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/17/nanowrimo-week-2/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image1.png"><img style="margin: 0px 12px 0px 0px; padding-left: 0px; padding-right: 0px; display: inline; float: left; padding-top: 0px; border: 0px;" title="image" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image_thumb1.png" border="0" alt="image" width="324" height="234" align="left" /></a><a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org" target="_blank">Nanowrimo</a> (the National Novel Writing Month) has finished its second week.  Writers as of today (November 16) should have written 26,667 words toward their 50,000 word novels.  The chart at the left depicts <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/602537">my progress to date</a>.  I have not yet started writing today.  I hope to complete between 1,500 and 2,000 words, which will put me in a position to complete the 50,000 word goal before the end of the month.</p><p>While this is good as far as the challenge is concerned, I was really hoping to be at the 40,000 word (or higher) mark at this point, so I am disappointed in my progress.</p><p>Also true is that I&#8217;m counting 11,997 words of character notes, background material, and scene descriptions in the total, so my finished word count is much closer to 20,000 (which means I&#8217;m actually behind the 26,667 word point I should be at by now.  That&#8217;s also disappointing.</p><p>Fortunately, however, I am taking all of next week off.  While I am doing this in part to relax, spend time with family, and do some holiday shopping, I&#8217;m also doing it to start kicking out the word count.  I&#8217;m hoping that at the end of next week I&#8217;ll be well above 50,000 words of &#8220;finished product&#8221; and moving closer to my 80,000 word goal.  Time will tell, however.</p><p>I was pleased to learn last week that the makers of one of my favorite writing tools, <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/" target="_blank">Scrivener</a>, have announced the upcoming release of <a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivenerforwindows/" target="_blank">a Windows version</a> of the software.  I own the Mac version, and it was in fact the reason I looked for a Mac when I purchased my last laptop.  Normally, I have no use for the Macintosh operating system.  (It&#8217;s not that I have any particular problem with the Mac, it&#8217;s more that I switched to Windows in 1998 and I haven&#8217;t had a compelling reason since then to switch back &#8211; Scrivener included.)</p><p>I&#8217;ve been using the free public beta of Scrivener for Windows since I found out about it.  For Nanowrimo 2010 I had been using the open source Storybook software which is fairly similar and works on Windows, Mac, and Linux.  The Scrivener beta has so far been very reliable and hasn&#8217;t crashed, though it has exhibited a couple of bugs that I&#8217;ve reported to the development team.  I expect to complete this novel entirely in Scrivener now and to acquire the final released version in 2011 when it comes out.  If you don&#8217;t have a favorite writing environment you might want to check it out, especially since it&#8217;s free at the moment.</p><p>Well, I&#8217;d better get to cranking out today&#8217;s words…</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/17/nanowrimo-week-2/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>NaNoWriMo 2010 Begins</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/01/nanowrimo-2010-begins/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/01/nanowrimo-2010-begins/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Mon, 01 Nov 2010 04:49:19 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/nanowrimo-2010-begins/</guid> <description><![CDATA[A description of National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) and information about my participation in it. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/01/nanowrimo-2010-begins/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image.png"><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; display: inline; float: left;" title="image" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/image_thumb.png" alt="image" width="130" height="250" align="left" /></a>Each November, an organization known as the &#8220;Office of Letters and Light&#8221; conducts an Internet competition called &#8220;National Novel Writing Month&#8221; (which is affectionately known as &#8220;<a href="https://www.nanowrimo.org" target="_blank">NaNoWriMo</a>&#8220;).  Those who sign up to take part in this event will attempt to write 50,000 words of original fiction between November 1 and November 30, 2010.</p><p>Those who complete this goal will be dubbed &#8220;Winners&#8221; and will get some token prizes.  These include a printable certificate with your name, graphics (similar to the one at the left) to post on your site, and discounts with a number of merchants who offer products and services for writers.  The most significant freebie you get is the opportunity to have Amazon.com&#8217;s &#8220;<a href="https://www.createspace.com/" target="_blank">CreateSpace</a>&#8221; service produce a printed paperback copy of your finished NaNoWriMo novel.  I didn&#8217;t take advantage of that particular benefit last year because I never got the novel finished and what I had in those 50,000 words (to be quite honest) was terrible.</p><p>This year, I started preparing in September.  I began writing my notes and character sketches, and even fired up a copy of <a href="http://www.screenplay.com/p-13-dramatica-pro.aspx" target="_blank">Dramatica Pro 4.0</a> to help me brainstorm and gather my thoughts.  My plan this year is to actually complete the entire novel (which will likely be more like 80,000 words) and have something I can officially print into book form via CreateSpace.</p><p>If you&#8217;d like to follow my progress on the book, <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/602537" target="_blank">here&#8217;s the link to my profile on the site</a>.  (The site&#8217;s been really, really slow lately, so don&#8217;t be surprised if it doesn&#8217;t work that well.)</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2010/11/01/nanowrimo-2010-begins/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>NaNoWriMo 2009 – Winner!</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/30/nanowrimo-2009-winner/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/30/nanowrimo-2009-winner/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Mon, 30 Nov 2009 05:01:37 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[creative writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[fiction]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[National Novel Writing Month]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/nanowrimo-2009-winner/</guid> <description><![CDATA[A post wherein I announce that I've won NaNoWrimo 2009, the National Novel Writing Month challenge. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/30/nanowrimo-2009-winner/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/" target="_blank"><img style="margin: 0px 10px 10px 0px; width: 120px; display: inline; float: left; height: 240px;" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/zrclip_001p7f084616.png" alt="NaNoWriMo.org Winner logo" width="120" height="240" /></a>It&#8217;s November 29, 2009, and I&#8217;ve just completed over 50,000 words toward a fantasy novel I&#8217;ve tentatively titled &#8220;Rogue Mage&#8221;. Having reached 50,000 words before the end of November, I&#8217;m now a 2009 <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/">NaNoWriMo</a> Winner!</p><p>The novel I&#8217;ve been furiously writing this month is set in a medieval fantasy world, very loosely based on medieval England. It focuses on two characters, Felicia Rothban and Aaron Blackwell.</p><p>Felicia, in her youth, was a very stunning woman. She was also somewhat shallow, and used her looks to seduce men who were handsome, powerful, and/or rich. Felicia was also quite crazy about flowers. While having a relationship with a powerful mage (wizard, magic user, etc.), Felicia&#8217;s window box full of flowers began to die. The mage, Eldren, cast a couple of spells that brought her beloved flowers back to health. He then went off to battle, and the flowers died. When he returned from battle, Felicia was mourning the death of her flowers. She begged, pleaded, and finally seduced him into teaching her enough magic to keep the flowers alive.</p><p>Eldren took quite a risk doing this. In the Realm, all magic users must belong to the Mage&#8217;s Guild. The Guild is a powerful organization chartered by the king, to recruit, train, and police magic users. They do not tolerate people outside the Guild practicing any sort of magic. The punishment for teaching magic to a non-Guild-member is death. The punishment for knowing magic outside the Guild is death. Eldren makes Felicia well aware of the risk they are both taking. Apart from the spells he knows for keeping plants healthy, the only magic Eldren shares with Felicia is a spell to heal injury to human beings. This he taught her to help keep her alive.</p><p>Felicia later left Eldren for someone more wealthy and powerful, a Lord Clemmons. Clemmons was a married man, but promised to marry Felicia when he ended the relationship with his wife. He bought Felicia a small cottage in a remote farming village and asked her to wait there for his return. Years passed with no word from Clemmons. Felicia was destitute and had no way back to Capitol City, where she&#8217;d spent most of her life. She had no skills, and her beauty was beginning to fade. All she had was the magic she&#8217;d been taught. She made the best of her situation in the small farming village she&#8217;d been left in. She told the farmers she could heal their sick crops, but was a bit vague on how. They accepted her help, because she got good results and helped increase their yields. They believed she was probably a mage but she had never admitted this.</p><p>Aaron Blackwell was a young man who had grown up in this small farming village named Agrinnia. He was a smart boy, but not very coordinated or muscular. This put him at a marked disadvantage for farm work, and he was frequently bullied and ridiculed because of his physical weakness. However, Aaron&#8217;s father got him a job at the scrivener&#8217;s where he worked. Aaron spent his days copying books, contracts, and other documents for the scrivener&#8217;s customers. One day, on his way to lunch, two farm boys carry the struggling Aaron into an alley and rob him, beating him severely in the process. He stumbles into the nearby inn and collapses at a table.</p><p>Felicia walks in and sees Aaron&#8217;s state. She takes pity on him and casts a spell to heal him. When he sees her pull a scroll from a case she carries, he recognizes it as looking a lot like something he had been copying at work. He realizes the woman is a mage and the book he is currently copying must be a spellbook. He then finds a way to get a spell out of the heavily-protected shop where he works &#8211; by memorizing it. He writes it down outside the shop and starts to study it. It&#8217;s written in a language he can&#8217;t understand and uses symbols that mean nothing to him. While he&#8217;s looking over the paper, Felicia comes into the inn. She comes over to ask how he&#8217;s feeling, and sees the spell. She turns white and tells him he must hide it immediately. He asks why. She explains that if he&#8217;s seen in possession of this paper by a Guild mage, they will most likely kill him.</p><p>Later, Felicia realizes that the best way for her to get out of town is to learn more magic. Aaron has access to a lot of it, and it&#8217;s clear he&#8217;s been getting bullied on a fairly regular basis his whole life. In exchange for the spells he can provide, she agrees to teach him how to use them. Unfortunately, because Felicia received only the most minimal training herself, they aren&#8217;t able to understand many of the spells they collect. They have to try them out and see what they do in order to determine their value. In time, they become friends and lovers.</p><p>One day, Felicia is asked by a local farm boy to help with a sick crop. She follows the boy to their farm. While walking through a barn, the boy turns and attacks her, attempting to force himself on her. She fights back, but he is too strong for her. She remembers a fear spell Aaron stole for them, and casts it on the boy. He runs out of the barn, across a field. He trips and hits his head on the stone wall around a well. She kicks him out of anger, after verifying that he&#8217;s still alive. She leaves. The boy later dies and his parents believe Felicia has murdered him. The national police force, known as the Realm Patrol, investigates. They determine the boy&#8217;s death was indeed an accident but bruises on his body match the shoes worn by Felicia. They charge her with assault and imprison her.</p><p>In prison, Felicia is visited by Eldren, the mage who taught her to cast spells. She tells him her story, including the use of the fear spell. He asks where she learned that, since he didn&#8217;t teach her. She tells him she sometimes buys spells from people who find them in a dead mage&#8217;s belongings. He doesn&#8217;t tell her, but he&#8217;s not satisfied with that explanation. He happens to be the mage who invented the fear spell and only a few others (whom he taught personally) know it. He sends an apprentice to investigate, under the guise of having a spellbook copied. Aaron copies an interesting-looking spell from this book and gives it to Felicia. She tries it out, and ends up causing a giant, brightly glowing ball of energy to appear over the forest near her home. The apprentice now knows there is a problem and returns to his master.</p><p>Eldren and three other mages return to Agrinnia. They pull Aaron from the scrivener&#8217;s shop and take him to Felicia&#8217;s home. They confront her with evidence they&#8217;ve collected. She tells them she&#8217;s been trading spells to Aaron in exchange for romantic favors, and that he knows nothing of what he&#8217;s been copying for her apart from recognizing the general look of written spells. She also points out that it was Eldren who taught her magic. The mages kill Eldren first, for violating Guild law, then kill Felicia. Aaron is allowed to live after they try to determine if he knows any magic. He finds out they got him fired. He now has no source of income and no Felicia. However, he has inherited her home. He sells it, and decides to go to Capitol City to join the Mage&#8217;s Guild, hoping to destroy it from within.</p><p>He&#8217;s admitted to the Guild and assigned to a master mage named Elric. Elric begins teaching Aaron magic, and takes him on a mission into a neighboring country. There, they need to find a way to neutralize the magic used by the local population, to pave the way for their king to invade the country.</p><p>As my 50,000th word hit, they were in the other country, posing as businessmen who hoped to make money there. They realized they would need enough month to be able to pass as wealthy businessmen, which neither had. Aaron had spent his inheritance getting to Capitol City, bribing his way into the Guild, and reaching Elric. Elric had a bit of money, but not enough to pass for a businessman. He tells Aaron the answer is to rob a secure bank in the village they&#8217;re passing through&#8230;</p><p>That&#8217;s where the story stands as of the moment&#8230; I expect to finish it some time in December, then clean it up a bit. When I think it&#8217;s at least &#8220;tolerable&#8221; to read, I&#8217;m planning to publish it as a PDF and make it available here for people to download and read. Right now, it&#8217;s incredibly rough. NaNoWriMo focuses on writing speed rather than writing quality, so my novel contains a lot of wrong turns and foreshadowing for things that I intended to write into the story and never did. If you were to read it in its current form, you&#8217;d most likely come to the conclusion that I absolutely stink as a writer&#8230; and I wouldn&#8217;t blame you. All I really have here is a very rough draft for a part of a novel, not an entire novel and certainly not a good, polished one.</p><p>In any case, NaNoWriMo was a fun experience and I look forward to participating in it again in 2010.</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/30/nanowrimo-2009-winner/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> <item><title>I’m a NaNoWriMo Participant This Year!</title><link>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/06/im-a-nanowrimo-participant-this-year/</link> <comments>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/06/im-a-nanowrimo-participant-this-year/#comments</comments> <pubDate>Sat, 07 Nov 2009 04:54:08 +0000</pubDate> <dc:creator>mike</dc:creator> <category><![CDATA[My Writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[NaNoWriMo]]></category> <category><![CDATA[novel writing]]></category> <category><![CDATA[writing]]></category><guid isPermaLink="false">http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/im-a-nanowrimo-participant-this-year/</guid> <description><![CDATA[A post wherein I announce my participation in the National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) challenge for 2009. <a href="http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/06/im-a-nanowrimo-participant-this-year/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description> <content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/" target="_blank"><img style="margin: 10px; width: 100px; display: inline; float: left; height: 100px;" src="http://mikesalsbury.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/zrclip_001n2da6f823.png" alt="NaNoWriMo Participant Logo" width="100" height="100" /></a> I first heard of the National Novel Writing Month (<a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/" target="_blank">NaNoWriMo</a>) last year, but never bothered to investigate it or learn much about it because I figured there was no chance I&#8217;d be able to write a novel that would be worth anyone judging for a contest.</p><p>As it turns out NaNoWriMo isn&#8217;t exactly a &#8220;judged&#8221; contest. It works something like this&#8230; Starting on November 1, you begin writing a 50,000 word novel. If you complete and submit that novel by November 31, you&#8217;re considered a &#8220;winner&#8221;. You receive a &#8220;web badge&#8221; and downloadable certificate you can print out. Not exactly the greatest prizes, but there are some corporate sponsors offering nice prizes. The makers of the Macintosh writing software &#8220;<a href="http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener.html" target="_blank">Scrivener</a>&#8221; are offering a substantial discount to the winners on December 2, 2009. An on-demand publisher will print a free &#8220;proof&#8221; copy of your book and bind it for you. They&#8217;ll also optionally help you sell it via Amazon.com and other outlets.</p><p>If you&#8217;re curious and want to check in on how I&#8217;m doing and what I&#8217;m writing, here&#8217;s <a href="http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/602537" target="_blank">my profile on the NaNoWriMo site</a>. As of this writing, I&#8217;m way behind the goal. On the other hand, I only really started this effort on November 4, so I&#8217;m about 3-4 days behind most other participants.</p> ]]></content:encoded> <wfw:commentRss>http://mikesalsbury.com/2009/11/06/im-a-nanowrimo-participant-this-year/feed/</wfw:commentRss> <slash:comments>0</slash:comments> </item> </channel> </rss>
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